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2015高考英语冲刺作文:写人记叙文

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  写人记叙文

  【写作分析】

  写人记叙文,一般为肖像描写、行动描写、语言描写、心理描写以及对细节的描写,应根据要求,灵活掌握,突出重点。

  【几点注意】

  1.使用正确人称和时态。

  ①时态:

  一般现在时--描写人物外貌、性格、兴趣等

  一般过去时-- 描写人物出生、教育背景、经历、事迹

  ②人称:第一人称或第三人称

  2.介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格等,包括所给的全部信息点,不能遗漏或随意添加。

  3.对所给的信息进行适当重组,安排好写作顺序,突出重点信息。

  4.正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型。

  【常见词语】

  ①外貌特征:

  pretty, beautiful, good-looking,handsome,ordinary-looking, with a big nose, with a big

  smile, short, tall,thin, strong, white-haired,1.80 metres tall, …

  ②性格特点:

  absent-minded, charming, attractive, bright, wise smart, confident, naughty,talkative, diligent,

  lazy, friendly, generous, be ready to help others,kind-hearted, warm-hearted, patient, humorous,

  have a good/ bad temper, independent,narrow-minded, …

  ③童年情况:

  as a boy of 15, be born on, during his childhood, live a happy/hard life, the son of a poor family,

  spend his childhood in, ...

  ④兴趣爱好: be delighted in doing, be good at , be interested in , be fond of , be crazy about, be pleased with, do well in, enjoy doing, have a strong desire to do, long for/long to do), take a pleasure in doing,…

  ⑤教育背景: be admitted to Beijing University, be enrolled in, fail in the test, get a master’s

  degree, get on well with one’s lessons, go abroad to further one’s study, graduate from,major in, receive a doctor’s degree, pass the examination, take an active part in, …

  ⑥ 成就或事迹:

  become a member of the team, encourage sb to do sth, give up one’s life for sth, receive the

  Nobel Prize for physics, set a new world record of,win the first prize in, win a gold /silver/ bronze

  medal, have a talent for, make up one’s mind to do sth., put one’s heart into, work hard at,

  concentrate oneself to, devote oneself to,do sth.with great determination and perseverance, ...

  ⑦他人评价:

  an inspiring leader, a model worker, an advanced teacher, be respected by , be honored as, be

  considered/regarded as, be famous/known as,his hard work brought him great success, make

  great contributions to our country, set a good example for , be highly spoken of for, ...

  例文

  你班要举办以“Ordinary but Great”为题的英语主题班会。

  请根据下列信息准备一篇发言稿,介绍赵郁的成长经历。

2015高考英语冲刺作文:写人记叙文

  注意: 1、词数不少于60。

  2、文章的题目和开头已经给出。

  3、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

  提示词:首席技师 chief technician

  Ordinary but Great

  We are all ordinary people, but following what we are interested in and doing what we are good

  at can help us make great achievements for society and go far. Here’s a convincing and inspiring example.

  ______________________________________

  【范文】

  Zhao Yu, the chief technician in the Benz Company,is regarded as a great success. However, his success is no accident. As a young boy with a sense of creativity, he was eager to learn and to make a lot of inventions. Being an ordinary worker in the Benz Company for 17 years, not only did he do well in his job, but he also made efforts to teach himself English and to learn how to use computers. Now it is easy for him to read English materials about cars. Besides, he became expert at solving various technical problems.Because of his great contribution, he has received awards many times.

  Zhao Yu has set a good example that ordinary people can stand out by doing their jobs with interest and enthusiasm.

  【评析】

  1.作者运用了所给出的全部信息:姓名、职务、经历。对所给的信息进行了适当重组,突出了重点信息(赵郁的经历),内容完整、详略得当,体现了话题“Ordinary but great”所表达的内容。

  2. 正确使用人称(第三人称),灵活使用时态(一般过去时、一般现在时);合理使用过渡词,使文章层次分明、结构紧凑。

  3. 语言规范,表达准确。文章运用了一些高级句式,如同位语、介词短语、分词短语、倒装句、同位语从句等,,增加了文章的亮点。

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